
Grade 7
Megan Wise, Casandra (Casi) Moore, Megan Horstman, Serita McCoy
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This part of the test contains two writing tasks. Read the two
writing tasks carefully. Choose only ONE of the tasks to complete |
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You will have 90 minutes to complete this task. You may or may not
work or confer with anyone. |
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Think about what you want to write. |
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Use a prewriting/planning activity such as making
notes, outlining, webbing, mapping, clustering, or brainstorming on paper
provided by your teacher. |
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Write a draft on paper provided by your teacher. |
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Revise and edit your draft. You may use a
dictionary and/or thesaurus. |
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Write the final copy in your test booklet
using a #2 pencil. |
These criteria will be used to score your work.
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PURPOSE/AUDIENCE:
The degree to which the writer maintain a focused purpose to communicate with
an audience by: |
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narrowing the topic to establish a
focus |
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analyzing and addressing the needs of
the intended audience |
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adhering to the characteristics (e.g.,
format, organization) of the form |
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employ a suitable tone |
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allowing a voice to emerge when
appropriate |
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IDEA DEVELOPMENT/SUPPORT: The
degree to which the writer develops and supports main ideas and deepens the
audience’s understanding by using: |
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logical, justified, and suitable
explanation |
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relevant elaboration |
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related connections and reflections |
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idea development strategies (e.g.,
bulleted lists, definitions) appropriate for the form |
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ORGANIZATION: The
degree to which the writer creates unity and coherence to accomplish the
focused purpose by: |
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engaging the audience and establishing
a context for reading |
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placing ideas and support in a
meaningful order |
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guiding the reader through the piece
with transitions and transitional elements |
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providing effective closure |
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SENTENCES: The degree to
which the writer creates effective sentences that are: |
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varied in structure and length |
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constructed effectively |
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complete and correct |
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LANGUAGE: The degree to
which the writer demonstrates: |
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word choice Ø strong
verbs and nouns Ø concrete
and/or sensory details Ø language
appropriate to the content, purpose, and audience |
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concise use of language |
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correct usage/grammar |
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CORRECTNESS: The
degree to which the writer demonstrates: |
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correct spelling |
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correct punctuation |
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correct capitalization |
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Choose only ONE of the
following writing tasks to complete.
WRITING TASK 1 SITUATION: Billy the main character in “Where the Red Fern Grows”
displays various character traits.
For example, Billy displays patience; he waited two years to get his
coonhounds. WRITING TASK: Identify at least two additional traits that Billy
displays in the story. Explain
Billy’s character traits, using at least two supporting details from the
book for each trait.
CORE CONTENT: _______________
Primary Core Content Code:
RD-O7-2.0.3
Students will
identify or explain the use of literary elements (e.g., characterization,
setting, plot, theme, point of view) in a passage.
DOK 3
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Identifies at least two other characteristic traits about Billy. ·
Supports each characteristics traits by at
least two supporting details from the book. ·
Must use clear language so the reader can interpret the meaning of
the response. ·
Uses appropriate vocabulary to describe Billy and that deals with
story elements, and characterization. ·
Shows clear comprehension of the question in the response |
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WRITING TASK 2 SITUATION: Billy worked very hard for two years to get his two
coonhounds, Old Dan and Little Ann.
They have very different characteristics. For example, Old Dan is stronger than
Little Ann, but Little Ann is wiser. WRITING TASK: Recall at least two additional characteristics exhibited
by the two coonhounds. Compare and
contrast these characteristics using specific details from the story to
support your answer.
PLEASE
GO ON TO THE NEXT PAGE è
CORE CONTENT:
_______________________________________________ Scoring Guide
Primary Core Content Code:
RD-O7-2.0.3
Students will
identify or explain the use of literary elements (e.g., characterization, setting,
plot, theme, point of view) in a passage.
DOK 3
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Identifies at least two characteristics of the two coonhounds. ·
Compares and contrasts the two coonhounds using supporting details
from the book. ·
Uses appropriate vocabulary to describe the two coonhounds and the
deals with story elements, characterization. ·
Must use clear language so that the reader can interpret the meaning
of the response ·
Shows clear comprehension of the question and response. |
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Use a #2 pencil to fill in the
circle that shows the number of the writing task that you have chosen. |
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PLEASE
GO ON TO THE NEXT PAGE è
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